Trapped in inferno
It blazed brighter than the sun
His desire for her
Written for Haiku Horizons – Fire
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A Haiku is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five; traditionally evoking images of the natural world.
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Very very beautifully written, keep this as my favourite of all haikus of yours I have read so far 🙂
Wow, thanks so much Shweta! will do will do, safely in a strong vault 🙂
The picture is mesmerising. And so are your words 🙂
Thank you so much Beloo 🙂
Thank you so much Beloo 🙂
You are perfect at Haikus. Powerful use of Fire!
Thanks much Alok! Tis one of my favourites too… 🙂
AMazing and perfect words!
Thanks Ajay, coming from a great Haiku writer, this means a lot 🙂
Good one 🙂
Thank you Deepak 🙂
Wonderful.
Thank you so much for stopping by… appreciate it 🙂
nice ! felt a slight twist in the last line … 🙂
Thanks Kokila! Hope you liked the twist… 🙂
Powerful…I liked it.. 🙂
Thanks U K… Glad you did 🙂
Wow! Passion and power have been conveyed so well in just 17 syllables!
Thanks so much Sreesha! Happy you liked it.
Since you are into book reviews, do read my first attempt on a book review – would love to get your feedback on it… here’s the link – http://drishti.co/2015/04/06/book-review-equinox-the-journey-of-love-begins/
Yup, I had read this yesterday, but couldn’t comment cos my browser crashed. It’s a pretty detailed review and generates interest about the book. But romances aren’t my thing, actually… But that’s just me – your review is great 🙂
Ahk! As long as you liked the review, am happy Sreesha; cause that’s mission accomplished for me. 🙂 Cheers
Nice one……….
Thank you so much 🙂
trap, desire, inferno… interesting collocations.
Thanks for dropping by Matheikal sir… and for the generous words…
Hope to see you on Drishti often! 🙂
Beautifully described the passion & fire. Passion if not handled properly, may burn you inside very badly. 🙂
Absolutely right Ravish. Thank you so much, happy you liked the description… 🙂
Simply beautiful lines Archana.
Hi Gowthama. Happy to see you on Drishti. Thank you for your kind words. 🙂
kya baat.. passion at its height 🙂
oh yes Roohi… always :p Thanks my dear 🙂
Hmm… power-packed lines.
Thanks Divya 🙂
Claude Frollo and Esmeralda come to mind at once.
🙂 wow… that’s quite something… thanks Antonina 🙂
Archana this is something we don’t have in comman, even to save my life I won’t be able to write a Haiku!
Well, I slightly disagree, to save your life am sure you’ll be able to write one :p and then we’ll have haikus in common too 😉 what say Mridula? 🙂
So passionate! I loved this haiku dearie… 🙂
Thanks Mani, glad you did 🙂
Amazingly written, I loved your poetry Archana 🙂
Welcome to Drishti Aunt Mary 🙂 thank you so much for the appreciation, am hoping you’ll read all my poems! 🙂
Do visit us often…
Awesome written archana!!!
Hey thanks for stopping by Supriya 🙂 Happy to see you on Drishti! 🙂
Hot Indeed!
Lol… thanks Amit 🙂
Archana,
It is pretty tough to communicate something in few words and also make sure it is understood. Mastery at work.
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I was looking for the name and finally I get it! 🙂 Thank you Katie. Humbled by your words. 🙂
Pleasure is mine Archana.
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Katie
🙂 happy to connect Katie 🙂
Apt – depiction of fire in seventeen syllables
Thank you Aditya. Glad you liked the depiction. 🙂
that’s very oblique