Bleeding didn’t cease
Wounds inflicted were so deep
Thorns were better friends
A Haiku is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five; traditionally evoking images of the natural world
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Betrayal
Deep wounds from the betrayal, deeper than some of those which we see in Final Destination 😉
Thorns are indeed better than some people. If you come to Kerala, I will show those people with expertise in the same 😀
Ok Teny… keep your list ready. Don’t know when I may just land there and surprise you 😀 but listen, be away from those thorny people… :-p
Thorns do reach out a lot, but I shall try 😀
Cool 🙂
The photo is disturbing and words so powerful.
Thanks Nisha… we thought it was a very apt picture, but i do understand it is very disturbing… Cheers 🙂
Such an impactful thought described in few words. I love the way you play with words and make them look so pleasing. 🙂
Thank you so much Deeshani 🙂
heavyweight philosophy!
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🙂 hope you liked it though Doc! 🙂
Cry of anguish
So it seems to me too…. 🙂
So damn impactful :’)
Thanks Maitreni 🙂
Picture is so intense, and haiku so meaningful.
Hi buddy – welcome to Drishti… thank you so much for your words of appreciation 🙂 Do keep stopping by… Cheers 🙂
O God Archanva !! The image is quite disturbing… and the words are intense !
Thanks Kokila.. I meant to make it look like that… 🙂
Mile na phool to katon se dosti karli…. It just to lighten the mood. Otherwise, the haiku is piercing.
I agree with that one…
Thanks Ravish 🙂
I have felt that.. and agree that thorns are better friends..
Thanks Roohi 🙂
Oh boy… such fierceness…
Hope you liked it Anks… 🙂
Absolutely powerful and piercing the heart and soul.
Thanks Vishal… 🙂
But what a picture 🙁
I know 🙂
This is brilliant, Archana. Any one who has ever been through betrayal can totally relate to the words. Soul piercing.
Thanks Purba 🙂
My oh my! Indeed deep it is… Awesome Archana!
Thank you Tara 🙂
Our Emotions at the deepest level go thus.. Sometimes the pain looks a welcome.. Rightly said!
Absolutely agree Sreedhar sir… thank you 🙂
Thorns at least alert you to the pain
You bet Lata…. 🙂
You got it 🙂 Thorns ARE better friends…anytime!
I think so Amitji 🙂
beautiful… the pain can be felt in the wonderful lines…
Thanks Ashish 🙂
Very well said Archana..
Cheers
Thank you so much for stopping by and for the words of appreciation Geets 🙂
It’s sad when thorns become friend 🙁
Agree, Amrit 🙁