Languid they call me
In Mother Earthβs cozy arms
Sweet slumber I say
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A Haiku is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five; traditionally evoking images of the natural world
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OMG so much intensity in few words ..
Hey thanks a lot Ananya π
Well said.
Thanks In π
Beautiful π
Thanks Purba π
Lovely π
Thank you so much Anjali π
Beautiful!
Thank you MS π
I was wondering…may you can write about something like this about Simona the Kitty π
Hmm, not a bad thought Teny. Send me some good pictures of Simona that may inspire me to write something… π would love to…
You haven’t been inspired by the pictures already present? π
I haven’t seen too many of them yet buddy…. so send me some… π
You will have as many as you want π
Then a Haiku is promised π
Means cat happiness π
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Mesmerizing as ever :’)
Thanks darling π
Lovely words…
Thanks CT π
May be Lazy but sure the Beauty of Nature.. Right words, Archana!
True sir… am sure everyone wants to be do the same… π
Beautifully put forth, Archana π
Thank you so much Ravish π
Sweet slumber for me too…call me whatever you wish:)
Lovely haiku, Archana!
hehehe,.. how about me calling you, ‘Amitji’?? π
Thank you so much…
ps – ditto ditto..
Lovely
Thank you Bushra π
So lovely…:)
Hey Chandan, welcome to Drishti… thanks for the appreciation π
Hope to see you on Drishti often, buddy! π
lovely
Thank you so much Nagendra π
languid or slumber.. i wanna sleep. it is sunday today ! loved this one Archana.
Heehee, take your pick (it seems you already have!!)… enjoy your Sunday Aj… Thanks a tonne buddy! π
Beautiful. I like it.
Thank you Rajesh… π
Very nice.
Thanks Aniruddha π
Beautifully done. Really impactful in such a short word limit :).
Thank you so much Aseem π