Like kin, seasons change
But like reliable friends
Clouds float forever
This Haiku is inspired by the stunning image of the clouds we encountered at Dawsonville this evening.
A #Haiku celebrating the floating certitude #Japanese Click To TweetA Haiku is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five; traditionally evoking images of the natural world
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Beautiful!
Thanks MS 🙂
Beautiful! Wish we could fly with them 🙂
Well, we can if we wish to… 😉
The Vampire Bat doesn’t fly though 😀
Ah, he walks?? :-p
He makes an underground passage 😛
sounds exiting, eh? 😀
A little bit 😀
A little is good for starters 🙂
I hope also for starters who start very old 🙂
Be positive Teny!!!!
My positive side doesn’t fly either 😀
So make it fly… you have it in you to do it… 🙂
Whenever I find the wings 🙂
Locate them soon 🙂
Working on it! 🙂
Glad… all the best 😉
Thanks 🙂
Totally agree with your Haiku. Reliable friends float forever however, these days it is very very difficult to get reliable friends. Most of the friends are like season, they come and go. We can’t blame them either as we have turned our self more into machine and feelings are getting lost day by day.
Hello Bharat, welcome to Drishti…
All I can say is there are exceptions everywhere… one has to deal with that…. but there are people who never leave your side… 🙂
Lovely haiku with a lovely pic. 🙂
Thanks Somali 🙂
So right you are. 🙂
In 🙂
lovely! 🙂
Thanks Apurva… 🙂 Just visited your blog! 🙂
Awesome 🙂
Thanks Anjali 🙂
very true.
True Ila 🙂
right! like someone said, we might not get to choose our relatives but thank god we can choose friends!
Hi Shubhangi, welcome to Drishti 🙂
True that… and thank god for small mercies 🙂
Aptly put. Khanabadosh badal 🙂
Thanks A… have heard that word after ages 🙂
So much of depth behind the meaning :’)
Thanks M 🙂 xx
Very apt….Thanks for sharing
Thanks Ami 🙂
OMG!! every word has a depth!! you have chosen very apt words!! its really fantastic in depth and as a whole!! Archana…you are truly fabulous writer!!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you Tina… you are super kind with your words…. 🙂
Wow.. Such meaningful words.. Fantastic!
Thank you so much Arun 🙂
Amazing.:)
Thanks Chandan… 🙂
Lovely!
Thanks Amitji 🙂
wonderful!
Thank you Binod 🙂
awesome!! 🙂
Regards,
Manasi Joshi
http://www.manasiwrites.com
Hey Manasi – welcome to Drishti…
Thank you so much 🙂
beautiful
Thanks 🙂 Just visited your blog… loved your Haiku 🙂
Lovely 🙂
Thanks Kash 🙂
Reliable friends & floating clouds…… Lovely comparison, Archana 🙂
Thank you so much Ravish 🙂 Glad to have you back 🙂
Sometimes I think, how happy and satisfied you must be after writing such a beautiful poems and I always less of words to express my happiness after reading yours Haiku…
Thank you so much Nimi… I sure feel happy when I am able to write things that people can relate with, especially friends like you 🙂
Such a lovely metaphor used for correlation! Loved this one.. 🙂
Thanks PH 🙂
Mesmerizing picture and a beautiful haiku 🙂
Thank you Purba 🙂
Really wonderful.
Thanks Rajesh 🙂
What a lovely comparison Archana.Truly Awesome Haiku.
Cheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
Thanks buddies 🙂
Ahha! Lovely!! So true Archana
Thank you Tara 🙂
Love the idea of clouds being friends. Nice!
Thanks dear 🙂
Lovely, Archana.
Thanks Celestine 🙂
What a lovely thought!
Thank you so much Mridula 🙂
Wonderful thought! A very warming way to view the clouds =) I have a new lens for next time I look up.
And hello Daniel… welcome to Drishti! 🙂
Happy about you getting your new lens 😉 thank you so much for the appreciation and hope you keep visiting often 🙂
Ennobling reminder!
Thanks Uppalji 🙂
Amazing PhotoClick and the 3 Lines forever convey the hidden Message of Life.. Rightly said, Archana!
It’s one of my favourite clicks too Sreedhar sir… thank you for the appreciation 🙂
I liked this photo and your Haiku. Simple, subtle and gentle 🙂
Thank you so much Omkar… and welcome to Drishti… 🙂
Hope to see you here often! 🙂
sweet!!
Thanks Dee! But you got to read the latest post too 😉 hugs!
Your haiku brought a smile on my face. I value friends and have friends who studied with me from kindergarten.
A lovely click of the clouds.http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1
Hi Kalpana, thank you so much… I am smiling reading your comment too 🙂
Just visited your site for the same prompt 🙂