I sat on the ship
On the great harbour of life
What a high speed cruise!
A Haiku is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five; traditionally evoking images of the natural world
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Interesting. Very interesting.. Archana.. It is high speed if you don’t stop to notice… The moment you stop to notice, you wonder…because you have to slow down to notice..
Indeed RS… thanks buddy 🙂
Simply amazing!!
Thank you Binod 🙂
So much evoked in so few words. Haikus penned by you never cease to amaze me Archana! 🙂
Welcome to Drishti Gauri… thank you so much for the compliment… 🙂
Beautiful
Thanks Rupam 🙂
Beautifully written.. 🙂
Thanks UK 🙂
I can so relate to it. Beautiful haiku!
Thanks Saru… happy to see you on Drishti… 🙂
Beautiful Haiku!
Thank you MS 🙂
A good comparison. Life and and ship. Like on a ship journey it’s always full of ups and down, always trembling, life is just the same.
Thanks Kishor… 🙂
I make the wish that my ship doesn’t sink soon 🙂
It won’t Tenss… am pretty sure of that 🙂 Just keep writing…
Nice haiku.
Amazing pic 🙂
Thanks buddy 🙂
Wonderful!
Thanks Amitji 🙂
Yup time just flies!
Yep 🙂
Just how time flies :’)
and how fast… 🙂
beautiful and thoughtful
Thanks Kashif 🙂
Very well said.
Thank you Rajesh 🙂
Time just flies with some highs and lows!!!!!
Oh yes it sure does… thanks Swati 🙂
This is lovely 🙂
Thanks Purba 🙂
Beautiful 🙂
Thank you Ravish 🙂
Wonderful lines 🙂
Thanks Deeshani 🙂
you always create wonders when it comes to Haikus for they are philosophical and make one reflect over them 🙂
Glad you think so Hargun… thank you so much my dear… 🙂
The metaphor is wonderful !
Thank you Milan 🙂
Short and beautiful!
Thank you so much 🙂
You haiku is lovely as always … but I think you might like to say in the harbour and not on 🙂
Hi Georgia… what a pleasure to have you over on Drishti 🙂
LOL… I contemplated … ‘on’ or ‘in’… turns out that I loved the sound of on… and so I decided to use the poetic license 🙂 But since you pointed it out, I stand corrected… Thanks dear 🙂 Hope to see you here often 🙂