Whispered tiny words
Flow from red estuary
Canticle of love
A Haiku is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five; traditionally evoking images of the natural world
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I loved “red estuary ” Part. 🙂 . Beautiful ….
Thank you Nimisha 🙂
Canticle of love…Oh wow! Beautiful, Archana 🙂
Thank you Purba 🙂
Very Beautiful 🙂
Thanks MS 🙂
Superb Archana! Great choice of words 🙂
Thanks Ravish 🙂
wonderful use of words Archana.
Thanks buddy! Been missing you on Drishti… hope to see you back soon 🙂
Lovely words….and the lipstick!!! 🙂
Thanks Madhumita 🙂
I don’t understand poetry but I liked the use of red estuary 🙂
Glad you do Anks 😉 Thank you… 🙂
Canticle of love! Mind blowing words!
Thanks Vyomi 🙂
Elegant words for a delicate expression of an alluring thought!
Loved it!!
Thanks Amitji 🙂
Canticle of love…Yes… 🙂
Take my advice, its time to pen down a book…
hahaha, in good time buddy… all in good time…
and thanks for thinking am worthy of penning down a book… Cheers 🙂
Indeed good choice of words ! smoking hot haiku i say !
Thanks Azzu 🙂
So beautiful this. 🙂
Thank you Soumya 🙂
Mesmerizing it is! <3
Ah! The picture sure is… Thanks sweetie 🙂
I sense something vampire-like; with blood essence 😛 😀
its the red lipstick Teny thats attracting the Vampire!!
Sure it is 🙂
LOL… this one is a top favourite of all our Vampi friends 😉
So beautiful this. 🙂
Thanks Kirti… 🙂
Nice words 🙂
Thank you Shweta 🙂
Hot hymn!
You bet! 🙂
beautiful choice of words!
Thanks Sangeeta 🙂
Hey Archana, I had to look up the dictionary for this one….:)….Once I understood the meaning, I felt that this haiku was of ‘literary’ standards….for the reason I will mention here…..Your use of the word ‘canticle’ which is primarily used for singing hymns in Church, and to praise Him, was contrasted by the presence of ‘love’ and ‘red’ estuary….connoting bodily pleasures….this made the haiku rich and resonant with meaning….at the same time, ‘tiny’ whispers spoke of a secret contrasting them with ‘canticle’ sung loudly in praise of Him…..my understanding of it…..let me know what was in your mind when you wrote it…..hope I understood it right…..:)
Absolutely what you understood Sunaina… thanks a tonne 🙂
Perfectly formed words … loved it 😀
Thanks Amrit.. that’s make it two of us 🙂
A rather unexpected image drawn by words, and therefore even more beautiful 🙂
Thanks Antonina 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂
Smoking hot!
Oh yea Mridula… 😉 Thanks…
Oh la la!
Hi Celestine… thanks much 🙂
The beautiful poetical expressions penned down here truly convey the silent message of pure love which forever is the number one sacred entity in the world of eternal strife…. Well said!
Thank you so much Sreedhar sir… am so happy you read the Haiku and liked it too… much appreciate your time sir… honestly! 🙂
Archana, Kya baat hai!!!
Thanks Uppalji 🙂
Wah wah 🙂 Those are some beautiful amalgamation of words 🙂
Hey Vinay, thank you so much 🙂
very nice Haiku 🙂
Welcome to Drishti Jiggyasa… happy you liked the Haiku… do drop by often 🙂
very nice.. 🙂
A Rat’s Nibble
Thanks Meera 🙂